Still Waters (Camilla Noli, Orion, $24.99 pb, April) **
In the suburbs, a once-successful career woman is unhappy in her full-time role as wife and mother. With her control slipping away and motherhood consuming her she becomes a danger to those close to her. Such is the premise of Camilla Noli’s debut novel, Still Waters. Novels written in the first person, present tense (as Still Waters is) are difficult—but not impossible—to execute well. Unless the author is particularly adept at crafting the written word there can be a tendency for this style of writing to lapse
into pages of tedious and repetitive self-conscious moments that jar and get in the way of an otherwise good story. This happens often in Still Waters. It may have been Noli’s intention to use this style to reflect her protagonist’s daily tedium and dissatisfaction but this isn’t always clear, as the writing, replete with oft clunky dialogue and numerous clichés, isn’t quite up to the task. It’s unfortunate, as Noli has tackled some confronting and difficult issues in this novel. That said; there is sufficient entertainment value in this story to appeal to—but hopefully not inspire—disgruntled mothers everywhere. This is one for the mum-lit shelves.
Deborah Crabtree is a Melbourne-based fiction writer and bookseller
This review from Australian Bookseller & Publisher magazine is reproduced by kind permission of Thorpe-Bowker, a division of R R Bowker LLC. © Copyright 2008, Thorpe-Bowker
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Am not sure I can agree with Deborah Crabtree's assessment that this novel "is one for the mum-lit shelves" - although there are certainly many mums who will appreciate this book immenseIy. But anyone who wants an insight into the mind of a psychopath (corporate or otherwise) will find this book richly rewarding. Deborah reckons the the style is "tedious" and wonders whether it is supposed to reflect the tedium of her life. I would suggest that yes, it does reflect the tedium of her stay-at-home life which many women will identify with, but it does more than that..we also get a sense of the deliberate and methodical way in which this particular psychopath operates. Within her own warped mind there is an internal logic, a kind of measured response to events that enables her to maintain her sense of control. The use of the 1st person, present tense was very powerful for me; she was like a secret voice whispering in my head and it was hard to get her out! That to me is pretty impressive writing!
Yes, to consign Still Waters to the 'mum-lit shelves' would do it an injustice and rob many other readers of the chance to experience it. It's a powerful, well-written book with the ability to convey the thoughts and emotions of a psychopathic mind so realistically and convincingly that many readers will relate to those thoughts and emotions, albeit fleetingly and with aversion. And - surely the ultimate factor in assessing whether a book is 'goo' or not - it's darn hard to put down!
Still Waters is a gripping book of great psychological depth, despite its accessible style. The topic may not be for the faint hearted, but the joy of this book is the emotional journey it takes you on, as you grapple with the dark. Noli tells a remarkable story that I would liken to masterfulness of Camus' "Outsider". Her character's voice in the first person was a master stroke. You never really know the leading character's capacity or her reliability as the story teller.
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